Saturday 18 April 2020

A giant's game

A giant's game

The enormous die crashed into the sand with a thud, but what number would it land on? The giants ran after it, craning their necks, jostling with one another to see what the outcome would be. As they moved across the beach the ground shook violently, barely able to contain their mighty weight and size. Finally, the die came to a rest. One of the giant let out an almighty roar of delight that reverberated miles around, "it was a six!'' he said with a sigh. It was his only chance of becoming smaller every time he rolled a number he got smaller so when he rolled a six he got to normal human size and left, he found a mysterious rune where he got a torch and an interesting coin, it was pure gold and probably worth about thirty thousand dollars he was delighted and moved on, sooner or later he came across two chests when he open one he got a hammer he was confused, did he have to fight he knew he had to fight but what did he have to fight as he moved on he came across a opening in the ruins and went in, and when he got there there was a place where he lit up, suddenly in an instant strange creature started appearing. This was the reason he got the hammer he thought a moment and then he swinged it at them their heads fell of and they were gone he was relieved that he beat them but the opening led him to plains where he saw the golden statue it was glisseming in the sun ray, he went to it and he was teleported to a mansion full of gold and riches he must have sold it to someone and bought the mansion he had a good journey and lives a happy life. the end. 

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  3. Hi Abhay,
    I like the way you added alot of commas in your piece of writing.I think you need
    to work on your paragraphs. It reamins me of when I went to the rugby game when I was yong.
    Well done Abhay. :)

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